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 If you haven't heard of Underfell, please check it out. I find it interesting! It's an AU where everything is in reverse.

    "You're really determined, aren't you?" Sans hissed mockingly, his shoulders bouncing with a low chuckle as he loomed above Frisk, his crimson eye glowing maliciously. A smug grin was spread across his features, and he let out a snort as Frisk heaved themselves to their feet, biting down on their lip to swallow a whimper.

    Their face was damp with tears, bruises littering their skin- but the fierce persistence in their dark eyes never faded. Clenching their jaw against the tightness in their chest, they shuddered against the cold and curled their fingers into fists. The frigid wind blew on, and the seemingly never ending expanse of gelid white was only broken by Sans' stark, blood red aura and the jagged shadows of the skeletal trees behind them.

    The silence was only broken by Frisk's shallow, ragged breathing. They could feel their own pulse in their head, behind their eyes, tainting their vision and making it fuzzy- but they had to keep standing. No matter how much it hurt, no matter how much their knees shook with the desire to curl up and admit defeat. Frisk was going to do this if it killed them. Kindness, compassion- it had to be down here. Buried, somewhere- they just had to find it.

    Flowey had taught them that, and so had Papyrus in the end, before Sans had gotten rid of him for being too soft. It had to be here, somewhere.. Why were they so blind?

    "Tell me, human," Sans drawled, inspecting his fingers and giving them a nonchalant wiggle before looking back up at them. "What keeps you going? Hm? I mean.. look at you."

    With a flick of the wrist, he suddenly lifted Frisk into the air, causing them to cry out in panic, tears burning at their eyes once more as they dangled helplessly, turned this way and that as Sans inspected them critically.

    "You're small, obviously weak, you got no powers," he listed, almost bored as he lifted them higher and higher, tilting his head. "And for crying out loud, you can't even talk right. What makes you think that a mere human child could be a match for someone like Toriel? Someone like Papyrus? Someone like me?"

    Frisk was quiet, their lips quivering, stomach clenching with terrified nausea as they continued to climb the sky. Their hair was cruelly whipped out of their face by the snowy gusts of wind, and their teeth chattered. They couldn't answer him. Why were they on this clearly impossible quest? To prove a point? To have a chance at glory?

    To be a hero?

    "Honestly, it's past the point of annoying, or even laughable," Sans concluded, giving them a spine chilling grin, eyes widening in mock innocence as he made their chilly ascent come to a stop. "It's pitiful, that's what it is. You know what I think? I think you can't answer me because you secretly think this is just as pointless as I do. But see, it's all a matter of pride in the end- no way you'd say that out loud, right? No way you'd just up and throw the towel in on your own, hm? What you need is someone to put you out of your misery."

    With a muffled grunt, Frisk shook their head frantically, trying to wriggle out of Sans' magical grip- but the fight left them feeble, and they frustratedly went limp not long after. This earned them another laugh, and Sans let out a slow sigh, his breath fading into the unforgiving air. He gave them one last look, ignoring the pleading expression on their face and the soft whine that warbled out of their chapped lips.

    "Consider this a favor," he snarled at last, lifting his arm and rearing it back. Frisk couldn't even scream. Sheer horror kept them speechless, adrenaline streaking through their veins as they waited for the soul twisting impact that would-

    "STOP!"

    A black and red blur shot out from the shadows and tackled the shorter skeleton, making him lose concentration. Letting out a strangled cry, Frisk fell- but not for long.

    Papyrus untangled himself from Sans' baffled form and dove to catch them, giving a dazed grunt as he landed with another painful thud. He held Frisk close, bony fingers digging tightly into the fabric of their thin sweater as he let the heat of his magical core seep into their clammy skin. Stunned, they buried their face in his chest, trembling.

    I'm not dead, I'm not dead, I'm not dead, I'm alive, I'm alive...Papyrus is alive..!

    "Papyrus!" Sans shrieked, clutching at his skull, practically melting the snow at his feet with his seething rage. "What's the meaning of this? I thought I took care of you!"

    "You thought wrong," the taller skeleton spat back at him stepping forward and fixing his sibling with a menacing glare that would make Hades think twice. "Enough is enough."

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CyanIla Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2017
Actually, Paps would be more cruel. And UnderFell is simply everything with more red, balck and heavy metal.
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MausyMoo Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for your commentary! I actually believe that there are multiple timelines and outcomes in any given universe-- even ones such as Underfell! So I decided to make mine a little different, is all. :heart:
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MayBearie Featured By Owner May 6, 2017  New Deviant Student Photographer
I love this ! This is amazing!
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MausyMoo Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you!
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Goshawk-Gyrefalcon Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is great. I especially love the last paragraph. 
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MausyMoo Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for your support! 
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Goshawk-Gyrefalcon Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's good!
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FrostfireAccel Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I literally just found this, and I LOVE IT!
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MausyMoo Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry for the late reply! But thank you so much for your support! It really means a lot to me!
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FrostfireAccel Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Not a problem! You keep being an awesome writer! ^^
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Shadow066 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2017
Rereading this again for the 2nd time over. love your work!! very very well made and thought out. one of the best i have read. 
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MausyMoo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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Flintpokemaster718 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016
shouldn't a reversed undertale star an angry Ksirf Arahc in new york trying to kill six monsters and use their souls to break through the barrier, enter the monster world, and kill everyone?
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MausyMoo Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Nope!
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Pumpkingstion Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm in love with this-
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synistersyrup Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like it! :- > I hope you continue!! Underfell Sans Icon 
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MeiMisaki66 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2016  Student General Artist
YOU HAVE TO MAKE A PART 2!!!!!
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DinoDotsCreations Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow this is truly amazing. I love the extensive detail you put into it! Please write more, my friend!
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me1234mh Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I thought it was Sans you made friends with in Underfell. Hey ho, each to their own I guess
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TNerdSansT Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017  Student Writer
Wha? Person.
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me1234mh Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
?
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AGuardianOfDreams Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2016
can you write more? I'm utterly curious about Underfell but don't have the imagination to create it for myself. I love this little bit! So far most I've read haven't even gotten past Toriel.... or wrote about how Frisk got past her. 
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JuriArt Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2016
Look in his profile, there are 8 parts until now
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AGuardianOfDreams Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2016
yeah, I did that... I wrote that comment without actually thinking of that first though. still, I do want to see more. 
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Flintpokemaster718 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2016
It sounds kinda stupid. Why change Undertale?
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underfelllover Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2016
this is good
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Animeluver05 Featured By Owner May 27, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
that was awesome :D
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FireEmblem4Ever Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016
I'm just over HER reading this while trying to find stuff that go with Underfell
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ponys321 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually, I like to think their personalities are either intensified, (ex: Toriel's protection) Or reversed. (ex: Papy's whole entire persona.)
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MausyMoo Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
That's nice! Different folks, different strokes!
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ponys321 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^v^
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Frisk360 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016
つつふにみゆゆみ
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Lauradrakkyn Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*endless gasping into infinity and beyond* Yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss*more gasping* sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss. :D
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FuyonaSoul Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Morreeee neeedddddd please
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Galaxya-13 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2016
That could make Hades think twice? Darn, that must be a killer glare... 
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HEAllbeeCat Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
worse than demoncreeper's stare i think....
*sees demoncreeper staring at me*
nope. not as bad as demoncreeper's stare.
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furryloveraj Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was a really good fanfic! at first I thought underfell was hurting frisk, but then I realize that really was the original sans and I was like "WOW what the hell sans!? what is your problem!" lmao XD
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Stitchgrrr625 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016
Wait it was the original Sans?!
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furryloveraj Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep! towards the ending the story says, "A black and red blur shot out from the shadows and tackled the shorter skeleton, making him lose concentration." so underfell saved frisk :3
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Stitchgrrr625 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016
Well then....
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furryloveraj Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was surprised too lol
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PickleSkittles Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Flickofda, flickofda wrist! XD Sorry, the song though. I can never take anything seriously. XD
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furryloveraj Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh my gosh that's EXACTLY what I thought of too! XD
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NightshadeTheFoxtrit Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SWEET STARFAIT TOPPED WITH CHEESE THIS IS SO COOOOOOOOOOOOL O^O
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Startoucher Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2016  Student General Artist
OH. MY. GLAMBURGERS.

I LOVE this!!!! It's so freaking interesting! I'd LOVE to see more!
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Soniclover111 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2016
-Meanwhile...- Me: ARE ARE
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mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Asdfghjkl love it
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MausyMoo Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: ! Thank you!
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mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Frisk the Fallen Child Icon 
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Shadowthepiratecat Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016  Student Artist
Beautiful
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